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  • Feb. 13th, 2006 at 2:57 AM
Puddle

Requiem to Kamakura

 

Eating soba noodles,

                      I sat

             On the couch where I could see the ocean

          I could see the          waves

          I remembered,             and then

          I got lost somewhere between

here

                                                            here

                        here

                                                                       

                                                                                                here

 

                                    here

here

 

                                                                                                            And somewhere over

there>                                                                                      .

 

-Andrea Romansky

Making a statement about my poetry professor

  • Jan. 27th, 2006 at 12:13 PM
Puddle

you’ll call this a sonnet
 
writing no longer means anything
now that you’ve forced me to abandon my ideals;
to follow your patterns; to no longer write how it feels.
who let you think that you’re the king?!
your putrid performance poetry is simply not my thing.
stop browbeating your totalitarian opinions at me.
whatever happened to ‘majority-rules’ democracy?
the popular vote is clear, but you’re not making deals.
i can hear color, and rhyme of symphonies
and you’ll stand there trying to rewrite my poem.
your opinion is yours — i will title my own piece.
this one is mine, and i hope it hits close to home.
i don’t care about your preference if this means something to me.
i don’t care about your preference — this means something to me.

Ballad

  • Dec. 7th, 2005 at 1:01 PM
Puddle
Mother

She turned to strike my face
I did not step away
And though she put me in my place
I begged that she would stay

"Mother, I don't want you to go
To the streets where you may roam
Each time you take to the bottle
I fear you won't come home"

My cheek will burn a might
I know the drink's to blame
But though my mother and I fight
I love her just the same

"Mother, please don't go tonight
I need you here with me
Strange men lurk behind street lights
You've not one child, but three"

But Mother goes against my will
I get no last embrace
Two days pass, my Mother's gone
And it's her role I replace

Exercise

  • Dec. 6th, 2005 at 12:34 PM
Puddle
As I rode out one morning,
In the merry month of May,
A fair young maid I spied,
And to her I did say:

"Your hair hangs limp like pasta,
I dare not look in your eyes.
I'd tell you of your great beauty,
But my mare, here, despises lies."

Thus the maid went running,
And my horse I turned away.
We all deserve a chuckle
In the merry month of May.

Sensory Poem

  • Nov. 29th, 2005 at 12:27 PM
Tracks
on the jetty

hush on the rocks of waves cresting
laping at the cracks
echoes of the seagulls' call
and the booey sinking up and down
a low whir as a moater boat passes
the crew shouts,
"Hello!"

the ocean is smudges like paint mixed too much
charcoal to the bottom
green twisted throughout
clouds fade the sky's color and the
horizen gets lost
somehwere between dark and light gray

salt on the air, in our mouths, in our nostrils
summer tastes like steam in a hot kitchen
where I'm boiling lobster
crisp, sweet apple tastes like sunshine
pouring down on warm, white sand

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